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接下来帮大家分析的这篇大作文出自剑桥雅思4，很多同学认为这道题目很难：

Happiness is considered very important in is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?

首先，从题目可以看出，这是一篇非辩论类的关于happiness的作文，大家可能平时练习的比较少，缺乏写作素材，这里就帮大家带来很多来自Simon的Ideas：

· Happiness means different things to different people.

· It can be described as a feeling of pleasure or enjoyment.

· People enjoy spending time with family and friends.

· Hobbies, sports and games can be a source of fun and enjoyment.

· Some people see money as a source of happiness.

· Other people define happiness as something deeper.

· They need to feel that they are doing something useful with their lives.

· Some people get a sense of achievement from their work.

· Others find happiness in bringing up their children.

然后，和以往只有一个题目的大作文相比，这道题包含了两个问题，这种题型被Simon叫做two-part question，同时也给出了这种题型的4段式结构：

Use the following 4-paragraph essay structure for this kind of question:

1. Introduce the topic and give an overall answer to both questions

2. Answer the first question

3. Answer the second question

4. Conclude by summarising both answers

和我们前几期讲的大作文结构相比，主体段由Details变成了Answer questions，结尾再总结一下每个答案即可。开头的Introduction段落Simon建议写两句话，引入主题并做出简要回答。来看一下Simon是怎么写的：

It is no doubt true that the majority of people would like to be happy in their lives. While the personal nature of happiness makes it difficult to describe, there do seem to be some common needs that we all share with regard to experiencing or achieving happiness.

大家可以看出，Simon一如既往地用了it is … that名型作为开篇第一句，第二句由while引导，前半句回答了第一个问题：很难定义，后半句引出第二个问题的回答：确实有获得快乐的的办法。

为什么快乐很难定义呢?这种抽象的问题让学生很伤脑筋，还是来看Simon是如何回答的吧：

Why is happiness difficult to define?

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